whitespace and etc

doc/index.md

@@ -16,26 +16,29 @@ is mostly written in) [Fennel](https://www.fennel-lang.org).
 ## Why does the world need another half-assed Webkit browser?
 
 It doesn't, really. But me, personally, I think I do. I want
-a browser that lets me easily change keybindings/add commands to do things
+a browser that lets me easily customize it to do things
 like:
 
-* find the open Fediverse tab and post a message
 * watch a local html file and reload when it changes
-* search the {Lua reference, Ruby docs, GTK docs} for term instead of wading through the the SEO cesspool that is the internet in 2022
-* search in previously "liked" pages for the thing I found three weeks ago,
-instead of ... ditto
+* find the open tab for my home Fediverse instance (or open one if
+  needed) and post a message/share a link to what I'm looking at
+* search the {Lua reference, Ruby docs, GTK docs} for term instead of
+  wading through the SEO cesspool that is the internet in 2022
+* search in previously "liked" pages for the thing I found three weeks
+  ago, instead of ... ditto
 * find the tab that's playing music and pause the player (instead of
-muting it)
+  muting it)
 * more stuff I haven't thought of
 
-Full disclosure: Dunlin today can do none of these things, but if I borrow
-enough design decisions from Emacs, I hope some day it will
+Full disclosure: Dunlin today can do none of these things - or much of
+anything else either, right now - but if I borrow enough design
+decisions from Emacs, I hope some day it will.
 
 ## Installation and getting started
 
 If you're using Nix, you can run `nix-shell` to pull all the
-dependencies. Otherwise .. Luarocks? Refer to `default.nix` and
-`shell.nix` and obtain:
+dependencies. Otherwise ... apt-get and Luarocks? Refer to
+`default.nix` and `shell.nix`, and obtain:
 
 * All Lua packages listed in any `lua5_3.withPackages` stanza
 * All system packages listed in any `buildInputs` or `nativeBuildInputs`